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The Legend of Flaze - The Crimson Star_pg 3

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Published: Oct 12, 2011

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Chapter 1 Act 1 pt3 - Quicker way

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OMG! I finally finished page 3

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Well there folks, firstly, I want to apologize you for taking so long to make my comic. School's has made me very busy and my laziness also doesn't help, and I have to study more in the following months, so (already warning you) the next page MAY be done only after some time

I really am sorry. I already have the sketches until page 7 but not the time to make the comic.
Well enough of being sad.
Previously, Flaze and Luna were attacked by Shadows but were saved by two mysterious characters (IF you didn't realize who they were, in this page you will surely know THEM

. Now that Luna revealed her special ability they can travel long distances very quickly. I changed the color of the sky and improved the clouds.
Please send me your suggestions, critiques, tutorials that can help me draw better, anything is welcome.

Tradução para português-br

Capítulo 1 Ato 1 parte3 - Caminho mais ráipo

Painel 1:
    Flaze: O que eram essas criaturas?
Painel 2:
    *Voz*:Vão para o Templo Celestial. Rápido, não há tempo a perder.
    Flaze: Essas cores!
Painel 3:
    Flaze: Você acha que podem ser eles?
    Luna: Eu não tenho certeza, talvez. Mas o que eles estariam fazendo aqui?
    Flaze: Não tenho ideia, mas se eles estão indo para o Templo, nós também devemos ir.
Painel 4:
    Luna: Bem, se aqueles realmente eram os Lendários nós temos que ir para o Templo Celestial o mais rápido possível.
Painel 5:
    Flaze:*pensando* Sobre o que ela esta falando?
Painel 6:
    Luna: Técnica Lunar...
Painel 7:
    Luna: ...Portal Lunar!
    Flaze: Wow, eu não sabia que você podia criar portais!
Painel 8:
    Luna: Vamos lá!

Nota: a tradução não é literalmente o que esta escrito em inglês.

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